Car Haiku

Car Haiku

A Poem by Relic

Old Abandoned Car In The Woods Photograph by Paul Freidlund - Fine Art ...



An old
     rusted car

found sleeping 
     in the dense woods

I dreampt 
     of its past.

© 2025 Relic


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i hear ya! i have a collection of pics i have taken of old trucks in barns, under shed roofs, in the woods
i am drawn to the free form patina nature commands
a commanding write

Posted 3 Years Ago


Relic

3 Years Ago

Thanks very much, Keith.
Love this haiku
I have a fantastic collection of pics of old rusty cars in broken hill nsw I took five years back
Love the pic you chose

Posted 3 Years Ago


Relic

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Julie. :)
Oh yes, think of its former glory in days of youth :) Fabulous Tim, both in imagery and on an emotional level. Top job.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


Relic

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Chris. :)
What a great inspiration for a splendid creation. Well done, says I.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Relic

3 Years Ago

Thank you. :)

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Added on July 30, 2022
Last Updated on March 30, 2025

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Relic
Relic

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I've been an amateur scribbler since 2009. You can also find me on Stars Rite under my real name Tim. Many of those poems are from this account. more..