Dear poetess

Dear poetess

My pen wants to comment;
it desires to reflect your dirty writing
with likewise dirty words,

but my morals won't let me.

The night is moon-filled; suggestive.
I should sneak past footprints of saints;
Outwit angels;
flee to where the ripples of euphoria
spread wide across your pages.

Then, my corruption could be our secret.

Reviews

[W. Barrett Munn]

Yes, corruption is a constant danger in these pages . Well written, Relic.

Winston

[Relic]

Thank you, Winston. :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

I found this most intriguing, but my inquisitive nature wanted more. Very good, Tim!

[Relic]

ha - It was justa passing phase, I guess. Thanks, Kelly.

[Coyote Poetry]

I do understand the poem. I have fell in love with many pretty poets. I am old school. Love need touch and kiss. Our words, never enough. I like the complete poem and the ending was perfect. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry my friend.
Coyote

[Relic]

Thanks very mich for your comment, Coyote. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Ken Simm.]

Excellent, witty and makes me wonder who it is you talk about.
Hope you are not getting corrupted.

[Relic]

It's just an ideaI caught in the air, Ken - haha - Thanks for treading.

[Chris Shaw]

Blimey. Who have you been reading:) I have to admit I have seen some pretty suggestive stuff written here by some of the youngsters. I don’t think my library will corrupt you though Tim. This by the way us a bloomin good write.

Chris

[Relic]

lol, I've seen some pretty rough stuff by those youngsters. The internet can lead to a lot of corruption. Thanks, Chris. :)

[John the Baptist]

Do I sense impure thoughts here?

[Relic]

haha yes, but only for a short time. :)

[andrew mitchell]

I like this Tim. Really emphasises the resistance to temptation. The battle to relax one’s morals and give in or stand by your principles. Or as some philosophers said just yield to temptation. It’s up there as one of my favs of yours. Great stuff!

[Relic]

Thanks very much, andrew.