NONAME

Living life, despite my pain,

all of the times gone down the drain,

If you hate me, what's to live,

now, now you got nothing to give,

everyday I lived my life,

waiting for the perfect time,

I know you don't care about who I am,

but I wish that you'd try, maybe just try.

Author's Note

I know, maybe it isn't all that great.

Reviews

[Bohrium Guy]

Very nice and I felt your imagery well. Good job and keep up the good work.

~Rob~

[lonewolf225]

That was a really good poem! I hope to be able to read more in the future!!

[P Mike]

Don't say so! At your age, Hsanderzz you kill it. I wonder how good you would have become in your thirties.

[AaronFreitas]

Well penned :) sometimes all we need to see is effort and that would at least provide us some happiness and ease the pain. Great write :)