Miss Staggering Eyes

"I love teasing you and seeing how much you want me" - VK Powell

Oh Miss staggering eyes,

 

You swept me by 

And now on you I rely 

I don't think it to be love, it's too wild

You make me feel an animal. Like it's been hidden inside

The instinct to make love to you is taking my mind.

Your scent be smelled for miles.

I need your drug

Oh! I need your wild

One more night I tell myself but by your rules I abide.

Even though I know soon this me will die, 

All because meeting Miss staggering eyes changes your mind.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I did liked this poem.
"All because meeting Miss staggering eyes changes your mind."
Staggering eyes. Can make us re-think life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Corbin Driver]

On the seventh line, I think "Your scent be smelled FOR miles" works better than the current wording. Other than that, great poem!