I like the flow that's present throughout the piece. The last four lines, more specifically the last two, are a great way to end the poem. Makes a lot of sense in contradictory way (and using contradicting words, when done properly, is a great way to flush out a difficult concept). Once again, well fuuuucking done.
Powerful piece. Did you really ever cut yourself? I used to, and probably still would if things got really bad. Great write, you expressed your emotions well.
~PJ
Troubling, though to the point (figuratively I mean). You've said well what your soul seems to cry out. Tragedy usually is an outpouring of pain looking for an avenue to run down. The poetry is good, the subject is sad.
LSS
Everywhere I Look,You're All I See.
Lay your head down just for now
Space fills your mind and you dream awhile
The sun floods your room as you drown
your lungs full of breathing
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