Thirst Quenching

 

 

            Thirst Quenching

 

If you want something real

Then look no further than me

But know that I am not about games and

My love is thirst quenching

 

Tracey Hamilton Ashby

Copyright 2008

 

Reviews

[Charles D. Moorer]

Short and sweet. The difference between "then" and "than." Then refers to "at that time." Than is compatrative in nature, Then look no further than me.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Short, sweet, tempting and well written. You tell us who and what you are in these few lines.

good write.

[K. Aurora]

This a very polite way of saying who you are and what type of love you can offer. I like it!

line 3 : "But know taht I am not about games and"
Should be "That" :)

I like these short forms of self expression. The reach people easily.

Great write!

Kansas