What Beauty!

Seated on a rock

At the edge of the water

Complete darkness

Except for faint light

Some distance away.

With the cool breeze caressing my body

And the ocean whispering seductively

The slinker, slither or whatever

Of time didn't matter anymore

What silence!

What beauty!

What a place to commune with oneself!

I chose to let go!

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Very nice, and really beautiful. Enjoyed this a lot, the scenery, the details, the feeling... very nice.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

very beautiful and familiar feeling, which maybe everyone experienced in moments of life! the need to be alone, to embrace the world with your senses, to feel the real beauty of the nature..that means all...
~nia~

[Thea]

A fantastic imagery you have in here, Ibrahim. An interesting piece. Well done!
:)))

[khalid]

i really love the image you have drown...at sea side..i love it..it is the most lovable place for me..to be at sea side when its hot and it blows on me..you have also picked a very nice time for your poem so it is very romantic. i just think..since it was complete darkness, how much close was she so you could describe her beauty that clear? nice writting

[Geraldine]

This is really really lovely. I liked this. :)

[poeticpiers]

You write free form which I dont usually bother to read. But your poetic prose is most descriptive and quite beaufiful. Do you ever write metered and rhymed poetry?

[Angelic Surrender]

This is wonderful.

[Mockingbird]

this is a very lovely poem. the place sounds like a good place to be with oneself and meditate and have tranquility. the water often gives comfort. nice imagery. great piece.