Wish

A girl imagines her wish.

Teacher went on and on in French. I didn’t want to learn right now. I sighed and tried to force myself to look at the teacher. A few more periods and my head will explode. To cool it off, I looked at the boy that was in front of the class. He had gold " brown hair and blue eyes. His name was Alex. I liked him since my first year of this high school. 

His sweetness, his kindness, him being good at every sport and his cleverness were some things that I liked about him. I sighed and let my imagination wander. If I was a wizard, I imagined what would happen: I stood up and ignored the teacher telling me that need to sit down. He repeated it over and over. I gritted my teeth and turned. I said to him and the class:

“Freeze.”

They stopped what they were doing. I turned and looked at Alex. He froze too. But he was really beautiful. I sighed at that thought and walked toward him. I took a sad expression when I remembered that maybe he didn’t like me. Still I kept going to him with slow steps. I knew that that spell was about to wear off. At last I was behind him. 

To put my hands around his neck was the best idea. I put them and laid my head on the left arm of mine. I looked at his frozen face. As I told you before, he was beautiful. Oh my god, I thought, I wish he liked me. I went through his hair with my hand. It was so soft and light. I stopped what I was doing and ran down his hands with my finger. He had slightly tanned skin, maybe from last summer. Now I looked at his eyes. True they were blue, but they had also brown and gray in them. I never noticed it. After thinking about him so much, I wanted to kiss him. 

But then voice interrupted me. It was the teacher; he asked me a question related to French. I looked around and saw that everybody wasn’t frozen and I wasn’t a wizard. I sighed and gave him my best answer. I realized that it was only a wish to me that will never come true.

Author's Note

Don't mind mistakes or how small it is.

Reviews

[mockingbird8]

This was good, but a little creepy.(in an interesting kind of way)

[Evita]

Definitely relatable and seems to point to a romance I would like to read about. I won't comment on any mistakes as you asked, but I would ask you to continue the story, and definitely edit it as you do...

[Jamie Raintree]

Aww! I hate being woken up from a great daydream. Very cute and totally relatable. I know every teenage girl has felt like this at some point so I'm sure you have a wide audience here. Great work!

[chellebelle]

Really enjoyed reading this, was a very sweet story. It's very well described and i could genuinely see everything that was going on here.
well done

[ApocalypticChick]

I really like it! I can really relate it to myself! Great story!

[Worfy]

You have captured some of the angst of being in "love" and not being noticed. I like your images and gentle handling of the subject. When I see that you are young, I commend you for your hard work...Keep at it. You will be the next Giller prize winner of GG winner.
Lest you get a really swelled head...there are a couple of places where the writing could be tightened. Well done.

[Ice Girl]

thank you

[Omegax45]

Short, but sweet. Who hasn't dreamed about wanting to be with their crush in class? Nicely done.

[Maddie:]]

I liked this one:] very lovely, you could probably add on to this more later! I do want to know more about the girl and Alex, nice job captivating me.