Halogen

 

Time to put on my facade

As a new day begins.

Sun rises

Night ceases to exist

At least for this moment

My thoughts dry up

And despite myself

I smile a madwoman's smile.

Choices so simple

So hard.

It was love at first light

That set me to pieces.

How useless was I?

How useless am I now?

A ghost trapped in a shell.

Persistance of memory

Never fails.

So I walk away...

Not wanting to return

but Having to.

I live for that look

In you eyes.

Pull me close to you and

Wrap your arms around me...

Calm this perfect storm

And with lips on my face

Eyes half lidded

Say 'lets go back to sleep'.

Author's Note

If there are grammer problems...don't tell me. Other than that critcism welcome.

Reviews

[THE LOST ROSE]

Very Crazy, Sexy & Cool poem. Very nice read and inspiring to other writers. standing "O".

[Sean Eddingfield]

Cozy... I loved it.

[Capriciousoul]

really romantic. i love it...i like the calm this perfect storm part/

[Jason]

"Calm this perfect storm, lets go back to sleep"....I mean, can it be said any better? You have delivered another great body of work here Ice. Your pain portrays your beauty through ink and it creates a wonderful picture. :)

[Kelley]

sweet and romantic.....and lets go back to sleep.
I loved this Ice. Your writing kind of sets the world
a fire. Great write thanks for sharing.

Kelley