Ill Defined

I'm surrounded

By worthless

Fingers and Toes.

Shrouded in darkness

A slave to my

Circumstance.

 

I am an

Inconsequential hue

Of a dissonant blue,

Leading a life

That has been

Constantly rained upon

By the light

In the sky

Of my circumstance.

I am an ill defined

Presence

Cold hands

And unspoken words

Floating in weighted silence.

Shrouded in darkness

By the light

Of these worthless

Fingers and toes.

A blue hue

Inconsequential and dissonant

Leading a life

Defined by my

Circumstance.

~Ice

Reviews

[Jenny Nelson]

Certainly can feel coldness and emptiness in this. I like that you don't tell us exactly what your circumstance is, because that leaves it open for many people in many different situations to identify with these feelings. I really like your line, "I am ill defined presence." That's a great way of putting so many people's feelings on their existance. This was really good!