Understated

With hard wrought

Denile hanging

In the air

There is nothing

Left to say;

Just tired excuses

Chocked full of

Regreat and tears

We forgot to shed.

Reviews

[Gregory H.]

Wow, ain't that the truth...lol... I especially liked the end "Chocked full of regreat and tears we forgot to shed...I think you spelled regret wrong though...Overall it was a very good write...

As Always
Gregory

[Alisa_the_fluff_ball]

Very simple, but good, I like this.

"tears We forgot to shed"
That line is the type that stays with you. Good job.

--Alisa_the_fluff_ball