As If It Belonged

Midnight sky falls

 

Rain

 

Icy

 

As the harsh drops

Coat my skin

Sinking in

 

As if it belonged

There all along.

 

The right always right sky

 

Sings

 

As rain

 

In big hard drops

Cleanse the

Revolving grounds

 

So afraid to let

 

Go.

 

 

Thursday 01/07/10

Author's Note

Wrote this on a whim for a contest.

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

this is a great poem. I can picture a 36 degree day with rain falling from the sky at night.

[Tina Kline]

Very nicely done. I got the feel of falling rain as I read it. It seemed as if there was a hint of playfulness in it too. Great job.