Dark Cloud

For a contest

Cold and deep,

Black clouds

Hang in the sky

With a Kansas sized

Chip on its shoulder.

Trying to get the rain

To find its way south.

 

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This sounds like a poem that a person would write in a draught stricken area. It create a picture in the minds eye. Great job

[DBURKE]

I agree with Tina you did create that picture- this is a short yet strong poem. I love it!

[Tina Kline]

Very nice. Your words create a picture of an angry dark clouds not wanting to move along. They just want to dump their rain and storm away right where they are. Like this a lot.