Blue Cloud

The blue cloud sunrise

Pushes and pulls

With the lamentations

Of the tides.

 

The blue cloud sunrise

Soft and delicate

Quiet spoken

Lifts the swollen

Sun to its feet

Lets it move to the beat

After a long slumber at sea.

Reviews

[xHaraMusicloverx]

Short but very well written. Beautiful.

[Poetic Beauty]

I can picture sitting on a beach some where watching the sun slowly rise. Well done

[Tina Kline]

I really love this one. Your choice of words created a very vivid picture for me of the ocean that is waking up with the dawn. This is really well done. I love it.

[Thus Said Broken]

I like this one a lot. It seems like a metaphor for life. No matter how bad things are, the dawn always brings something good. I don't know if that was your intent, but that's how I interpreted it.