The Darkness

A Poem by ICE

Floating in a dark abyss

Silence pulls me under

Cradling,tugging, pushing

Until I can't tell which

Way is up anymore.

The vibrant nothingness

Quiets my screams.

I can feel it coming for me.

© 2010 ICE

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The Message

The space before the final line is a brilliant touch, the impact is perfect.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Art Sun

Poetic...there is an emotional questioning of that silent scream...to be within darness and only feel the loudness of the unknown is to feel...afraid...nice work on this poem...

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on April 3, 2010
Last Updated on April 3, 2010

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ICE

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I'm a brooding poet who has been writing since middle school. My writing has a tendency of being rather dark...and I like it that way. I am female who is 20 years old and I'm currently in colle.. more..