Beautiful

Beautiful red flower

Fragrant in the sun

Swaying in the breeze

The day far from done

Don the light in

Striking soliloquy

Leave the wind breathless

In your wake.

You are a beautiful red flower.

~Ice 

April 9th, 2010  

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

very nice..

[Poetic Beauty]

I like the way you describe the flower in this poem. You make its beauty known. This is a short but descriptive poem.

[Daydreamer54]

i like this, simple but mnice. great ujse of imagery and soliloquy- i have a new word to look up. lol! :p Afew minutes later... hey i know wat it means now, i solilioquy all the time lol! I talk to myself. ^^

[DBURKE]

Great imagery_ I Ioved it!

[Tate Morgan]

Very nice I am not in favor of soliloquy it is too rarely used

[THE LOST ROSE]

Prince wrote a song titled "Beautiful & Blessed. Find that song and during the instrumental part read your poem to it. Awesome, Love it! thanks for reviewing my poem "A Cloudy Afternoon Thought"