Floundering

A Poem by ICE

Save me

From the long lost echo

Of my imagination.

Let me rise to fall

And fall again and again

With inerrant grace

And carefully planned frustration.

Let me be

As I once was

So that I can find the me

Here.

The me now

Lest the Heaven and Earth

Suffocate me

And I drown.

~Ice

Sept.14,2010

11:54pm

© 2010 ICE

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Poetic Beauty

You always have a great depth to your poems and wonderful detail. the last stanza makes this poem deep.

Posted 15 Years Ago

Bette

i think some times we all forget who we are and what makes us ...well us. well done

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I'm a brooding poet who has been writing since middle school. My writing has a tendency of being rather dark...and I like it that way. I am female who is 20 years old and I'm currently in colle.. more..