The Moth and the Flame (Fly to Desire)

I am a moth that loves the precious flame
That flickers on these dark and lonely nights
Guiding me home in hopes that it will tame
My lonely thoughts that I'll forever fight.
This precious flame, it flickers in my heart
And gives me hope to carry on once more,
And when this world decides to tear apart
My dreams, I then know what I'm living for:
I'm living on in hopes that I can see
The flame that soothes this lonely, bitter soul,
And when I see the flame nourishing me,
I'll keep it close and never let it go.
I am a moth drawn to a pretty fire
That gives my heart everything it desires.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

A metaphorical tale of love.

Reviews

[GridLok]

We are too often drawn close to that which consumes us. I found the phrasing somewhat uncomfortable.

[Fairytale]

Beautiful imagery. I loved the use of the flame in your symbolism. The effect was calming.

[Black Swan Poetry]

fire has inspired many a poet.

[realmwriter]

I really like this. I feel I must say that some of the rhymes feel a bit forced but the meter works rather nicely, sets a good pace for the piece. Just do me a favor, Don't fly to close the flame little moth. And should the flames last flicker fail and the fire dies I hope the moth can still find its way by the moon.

[Fragilebrokendreams]

Aw its so cute in a way how you used the moth and the light as a metaphorical pairing. But its also full of hope and joy in this little moth's heart :)

[Miss Marie Riorden.]

Finally a poem full of hope and love.
I love your original style, but this is great as well.

A great poem as well the metaphor shows well

-Marie Riorden-

[Lily Mae]

You know I love this..xo ;)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed, and well written one also, you always peek my interest my darling x