Note in a bottleA Poem by MitchNephetsIt's about a stranded survivor of a tragic storm and his tragic demise.Note in a bottle. A soda
bottle floats passively in the ocean It rocks back
and forth, so small, unnoticed Insignificant
to all but the sender He has put all
his hope in the bottle Scratched in
to a small palm leaf A few
important words in a language That no one
can read A soda
bottle floats in the ocean Alone,
without a companion Much like
the stranded sender A flotsam
bottle, rubbish To most
people, to him a lifeline Tossed from
a remote island That no one
can find A soda
bottle sinks in the ocean Just like
the ship that cast him aside Wrecked by a
ferocious storm As the
bottle sinks, so does his hope The hope
that one day he could be saved But he has
come to realise That no one
can save him © 2011 MitchNephetsAuthor's Note
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1 Review Added on December 22, 2011 Last Updated on December 23, 2011 AuthorMitchNephetsBournemouth, Dorest, United KingdomAboutI'm a young man from the south of England and Mitch Nephets is not my real name. I like writing, I find it a way of letting out my negative feelings and sometimes my positive feelings. I don't really .. more.. |

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