THE FIELDS OF BEAUTY

It was dawn
When darkness crept over me
When the lonliness came to prick me
Just like a thousand needles
As i astroded towars the window
The one roaring at me
I could feel the Earth wobble
And feel the sky tearing apart
Life was shattered and asked me now and then
That did i live for the sake of my geed
Neither i could speak nor could i move
And the silence slapped me as i cried
I fell helpless to the groung
Just like a tree in the storm

Then a cold breeze in its way
Whispered silently in my ears
Beyond the mountains of greediness
The valley of truths and lies
The streams of want and need
There exists a field, a huge field
A field without haste venom and anger
And i could feel darkness changing to light
And shadows of lonliness running away from me
I cried hard to set free the oceans in me
But i couldnt cry even a tear
And in silence i bare the burden of a mistake
A mistake that wasnt mine

The fields of beauty
Filled with beautiful souls
I lingered, lingered with a thought
Thought that the field would always revive
For its beauty is eternaland will always be
I felt the warmth of sun over my face
As i looked up i felt the clouds
As if they were singing 'fields of beauty'!!

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[Sami Khalil]

"I cried hard to set free the oceans in me
But i couldnt cry even a tear
And in silence i bare the burden of a mistake
A mistake that wasnt mine

The fields of beauty
Filled with beautiful souls
I lingered, lingered with a thought "

This was wonderful....Thank you for penning...:)...............

[RosE]

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