DECADENCE

The battle to crush my sanity rages on

 

Malicious forces of immorality hover over me

 

Like violent burning skies,

 

I stand before an altar of bedlam

 

As they await my submission

 

The enemies of my mind have no compassion.................

Author's Note

To be continued...

Reviews

[Layi Tate]

Add more to it I like how your mind travels with this .....

[Rob Santana]

Thank you, Layi. Going to have to go deep into my mind to continue this one. It's exactly what I did to create this one.

[Layi Tate]

I look forward to it lol Dive in !

[mishka]

Rage against the Machine, my friend-Rage against the machine...

[Rob Santana]

Raging on......

[Matching Socks]

You must not submit!
I love this... It's dark. Is there a part two coming?

[Rob Santana]

I won't!!! Hahaha. I'm going to start working on part two soon. Glad you liked it Ana.

[Matching Socks]

You must send if via RR when you do!

[Matching Socks]

Remove 'if' - wtf?

Oh!! Supposed to be 'it' - Duh

[Rob Santana]

Hahahaha, I got it

[s y e]

Now this is dark and creepy with a hint of mystery too. I liked it. You always ace these poems, Rob. Sweet write my friend!

[Rob Santana]

Thank you sweet noodle.

[Mai Marquez]

Dark and foreboding the battle rages on. Find your strength and conquer them. This piece provoked some thoughts in me.

[Rob Santana]

I will always fight on. I don't have the luxury of quitting. Thanks for stopping by Mai.

[Tinkerbellje]

Brilliant.. The eternal struggles of ones own mind. It weaves an endless pattern of disarray sometimes..

[Rob Santana]

I agree, I still struggle from within. Glad you liked it.

[Frieda P]

What did you do now Rob? I hear you roaring, you always nail these my creepy friend. ;-)

[Rob Santana]

Hahahaha, nothing. Just sitting here eating a bowl of cereal getting ready for work.:)

[Frieda P]

You're always up to no good, its gotta be something my friend. ;-P

[Rob Santana]

Nope, this time it's just me being coo-coo for coco puffs, hahaha that's it. I'm happy it's Frieday!!!! :)

[Frieda P]

I don't think you're the only one...Cheers! ;-)

[redflutterby]

Love this one....that last line speaks volumes...but we keep fighting that battle till the last breathe. :-)

[Rob Santana]

Yup, we don't have the luxury of quitting....

[redflutterby]

Never been a quitter anyway...too feisty for that! Ha...

[Traci]

An excellent write that resonates deeply. Can't wait to read more.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you very much Traci...

[Lily Mae]

I might just be a cousin but..lol I have two nuggets to share with you.. This kind of work speaks to all of us who struggle everyday with choices while that malicious hovering is right there with us.. I just do my best day to day and hope I'm listening to the right voice in my head and heart..xo Excellent pen..xo :)

[Rob Santana]

Good advice Lily, thank you. :) You always put a smile on my face.