UNWELL

This is hint fiction (n): a story of 25 words or fewer that suggests a larger, more complex story.

Sharks circled our small boat. We were out of food and water. Dehydrated, Jake looked unwell. When I got the chance, I pushed him overboard.

Author's Note

hint fiction (n): a story of 25 words or fewer that suggests a larger, more complex story.

I tend to always go over the 25-word limit.

Reviews

[EJ's Horror]

It's a good story, but I counted 27 words, unless you don't count the I's.
But I'll be honest I had a bit to drink so I counted the words about 10 times and 4 of those times were 27. But I feel you do have a gift of making broarder stories with few words, keep writing
:)

[Imorbid]

Lol you counted correctly and I fixed it.