Another Heart that Beats No More

A feeling I've felt before

In the rain

You ran outside

To bring me pain

And take my pride.

 

I felt you

Rip out my core

Your knife went through

I stood no more.

 

Here I lay

And now you run

But you will pay

For what you've done.

Reviews

[Princess3Morag]

Oh wow, I love it! The rhyming makes it easy to read and the poem is obviously sad, which is why I like the ending.