It Sucks to be me!

Why did you do it you said to me?

I've never been comfortable being me.

Try to be others like change my name.

Follow the style like playing a game.

 

Change colour like a chameleon to a new surrounding.

Feels so deep so enhanced but it feels so bounding.

Trying to be thin just to fit in.

To be anything,where do I begin.

 

Do I go Blonde red or brunette.

Always feels that the pressure's a threat.

Who do I be, who am I trying to be?

Why is it that I'm blind and I cannot see.

 

Is it all in my mind?

What am I trying to find?

I just wanna be free.

But it sucks to be me.

Reviews

[Sheila Marie Carr]

Aw so sad, "follow the style like playing the game", this line seems to be what everyone is doing. There is no indiviuality anymore, but that's what the world has come to. Sorry you feel that way about yourself, but I understand, been there all my life. "Keep your head up"

[R.D.Scott]

Another good piece although I have noticed that most of your work is based on rhythm. Do you have any pieces that dont flow in rhymn, as I would love to see the other side of your work?

[Denni]

i realy like how your poems seem to inspire me. they make me open my eyes to the world around us, and to all the people that think they dont fit in or try to be something they arnt, great work!

[tanker22]

i could use some punctuation but other than that i liked it

[Domo]

Life sucks, but it gets better(hopefully). Anyways, great poem, the chameleon line really got to me.
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