The One Who Chases The Star

A symbolic poem involving the star in which it connected to hopes , dreams and Ideals. Chase the star and never given up on your dream.

Beyond the star , I fathom...
Faraway it was , I sadden...
And now I lament...
Star , oh star...
Where are you?
Don't you gone I beg you...
For my dream are precious...
For my Ideal , I treasure...

So hear me star ,
And return my ambition...
For all hope not yet lost ...
For all determination not yet gone...
For all dream not yet astray...

So My faraway friends ,
give me a bright star...
An eternal , Shining star...
So that my dream can finally become true...
So that my Ideal are finally realise...
So that my hope are finally secure...

Reviews

[Scott Metro]

Longing...we all have it don't we ?
This is very nice...you expressed it well !
Enjoyed this.
Scott

[F.Z]

Thank you for the review :) glad to hear somebody enjoyed :D

[Scott Metro]

:)

Scott......

[Bri]

Beautiful, just watch out for spelling errors, at times, it may take the attention away from the beautiful message that you wish to express.
Great write
-Bri.

[F.Z]

Thanks for the review and advise. I will take note of that when writing my next work of art :)

[Sami Khalil]

This was unique and lovely in a sad way...Thank you for sharing...:)...................