Morning Views; 17. Jul

17, July 2013

 

 

1.

Last night was the first night in so many, many nights that I did not dream a dream.

No silent screens of my long lost one time queen,

No golden coasts I could not reach.  

Thank god for prescription ‘Z’.  

 

2.

Unexpected guests have a way of changing an entire morning,

Sometimes for the better, sometimes for the worse.

Today, I don’t think I minded in the least. 

Reviews

[Lostangel]

I can relate all to well with the dreams of the lost ones and the unwanted and often wanted awakenings... Smiles, Tammie

[A.J.]

thank you so much for reading!

[krish]

It's a interesting piece, don't ya think you've to write one story on it too.. beautifully written.100/100

[A.J.]

a story on which one? thank you very much!!

[krish]

My pleasure...
a story on a "Morning time", yeah, you can write on it too, i've read your this poem and i inspired from here... tthat'swhy i told you write on story too.. i'd love to read.

[The Verse: A Poetry Jou..]

Interesting they remind me of John Berryman (dream songs), and the fact that they too are confessional. This project of yours seems to be your best work. keep it going!

[A.J.]

YES. thank you!

[The Verse: A Poetry Journal]

No sweat, officially impressed!