A Thought upon Waking

I woke to a sharp pain in my chest

And an outline of my body written in cold sweat

Ive heard of that; of people dreaming themselves to death

She had heard that too, at least last night , that’s what she said

“you’re making yourself miserable babe.”

“no, I already made myself miserable;

Nearly three years ago now, remember?

Now, I just relive it.”

but the bed was full of emptiness.

Reviews

[Lostangel]

This is very deep and could very well be made into a very mysterious and haunting story/movie...with what you have written, it took me to a place in my life as well... very well written poetry... and much enjoyed! Smiles, Tammie

[A.J.]

hello! and thanks for reading! if this hits home for you, much of my other material will do exactly the same... not trying to self-promote.. but bearing the subject in mind, i myself search for like-minded work.

[Lostangel]

I do the same thing, nothing like kindred spirits! :)

[A.J.]

I have decided to put this into my "stories to develop que. lol! thanks!

[Sami Khalil]

The title , the progression , the images , the message are all good ... Thank you for sharing...:)

[A.J.]

thank you for reading!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)