Daisy

You wanted to know if I loved you

So you plucked my petals one by one

Throwing them off to shore

 

And by the time you found your answer

I was not a flower anymore

Reviews

[writ rajat]

Very nice amazed by reading it tremendously emotional and sagacious

[Inkh(e)art]

Thank you so much!

[TheLostMind]

This is so deep and meaningful. A terse poem that says a lot. A really good write!

[Inkh(e)art]

Thank you!

[Anjali]

So creative! This is really creative dan imaginative! Loved this one a lot!

[Inkh(e)art]

Thank you so much!

[Anjali]

You are welcome!

[The Iron Horseman]

Loved this! Concise, thoughtful, very well done. An original thought with a profound message.

[Inkh(e)art]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Unique and creative...I truly loved it...It has a greater meaning....

[Inkh(e)art]

Thank you so much!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.