Sandcastle

Our love was like a sandcastle

'Cause no matter how hard we tried

The ocean would touch our feet

And wash it away with the tide

Author's Note

I wrote this one a few years back. Hope you like it

Reviews

[Anthony (aka Mr.e)]

Simply striking and heavily structured, much enjoyed!

[Inkh(e)art]

Thank you so much!

[emipoemi]

A short piece with an epic woven between the lines. Brilliant imagery!

[Inkh(e)art]

Thank you!