Orchestra

You'd like to call yourself
So clever
So smart
And so sweet
If only you knew
The bells that you ring
You'd build up a chorus
And write out a rhyme
And strike up the band
Together in time
Notes hit my throat
Course through my veins
Like needle-ships sailing
I'd soak up their pain
And they'd pull up a smile
Slapped on their face
A soapy empire
And a sun in the rain
I think I'm confused
Or maybe insane
I'm definitely crazy
And probably lame

12/4/07

Reviews

[Choosing Life]

Lame? No....
Crazy? Maybe, but the whole world is crazy...

I liked it. I am glad it ended the way it died because I was wondering why it was going back and forth in a sense. BUt confusion mixed with emotion will have one all over the place.
i enjoyed the piece