The Key

Never Stop Pondering ...

The Key

 

Every sacred place beckons

A life lived, trial heard; fearful witnesses abound

Begging mercy, no sound prevails

Locking doors of negativity

Un-heard-of emotion

Smothering in solitary confines

Lines crossed; Soul dies

Prophecy unfolded

Despite all, you hold

The Key.

 

Reviews

[Introspective Mind]

Great flow with strong subterranean consciousness.....elegance of transcendance in life....the key just doesn't only open up a sequence of new realms but a string of new visions....a stream of new comprehensions....too to explore the newer vista...love the read...love the smell of the high mountains too....
Best regards,

[CRISHAM]

This poem has a haunting quality and a strong metaphorical focus. You’ve created something that leaves the reader thinking deeply, and I encourage you to continue exploring these powerful themes in your work!”

[Omotayo Oluwatobi David]

I love how the lines flow. Reading this poem made me conclude that you are such an intelligent writer.

[Pebbles]

brillaint write love the way you play with the format here , the underlining works well

[Demi Rose]

i love this. it is lovely and uplifting at the same time.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Right on! You said it all in a very few, well chosen words. I really dig the positivity written here.
Excellent. Thank you!

[InspiredHope]

The title alone draws me closer in understanding myself... needing that key to unlock my true potential and how I treat others. I thank-you for this write and (as-always) am grateful for you and your inspiring words of wisdom.

Our lives need to-be heard to inspire others to grow, blossom become who they were meant to-be - this poem breathes new hope and grants the gift of renewal.

Who within our lives (physically and spiritually) may hold this key to unlocking our potential... gifting us with our true destiny - so many questions that can-be answered through this write.

Again, you words have graced this day and I thank-you for this. Continue on...

Hope

[Legacy]

Innerspirit,

From your writes it seems you have conquered a new realm of writing.

Most of us attempt such a feat and sadly to say it is vaulted by the words attempt.

Your perplexity of understanding holds to no-one this KEY of life.

For one to truly UNDERSTAND one must STAND UNDER. For you this has been mastered with words woven into such poetic interpretation.

One must now STAND UNDER you to truly UNDERSTAND.

This I am proud to be doing.

I hope this you do not UNDER STAND yet STAND beside, would be my honor.

Response as it may - Words of compliment hard to swallow, at times hard to believe... Doubt sets in for we find this hard to believe even though our own pen writes these words? I say to you then...

Never believe such words of doubt your lips release.

Truth last for times we test.

Lies are but a moment of broken Breath.

My words of you are yours not to contest...

Great job

You never stop growing

Well Done

Poetic Infusion
Legacy




I say to you -