Let It All Pour Down

A Shakespearean Sonnet

See the lightning, hear the thunder
Watch the clouds loom over your head
Look up to your heart and wonder
Feel it cry upon your face red

One by one, each burn falls
Leaving it's trail as it gradually goes
Run, leave, before it begins to crawl
Follows you to where? Who knows?

Let everything, let it all burst out
Just clean up the mess you've made as you go
Don't let it trap you into swelling up stout
Let your tears out; look out below!

Let it rain, let it pour down
Let them stain your dove-white gown

Reviews

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[Vesa Lee]

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[Bud]

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