Broken Puzzle

Woo another poem

Thousands of pieces that fit together

All scrambled in a box

Thousands of look a likes and confusion

Could take hours to fit together

Friends help you build the outside

But it still takes loads of time

Friends help you fit together

What you could never figure out

The inside starts to form

But the puzzle has fallen

Picking up the pieces

While the finished half is still whole

Days and nights have broken through

But the puzzle is almost finished

Just the center piece is left

1 last piece and we will be whole

But as the puzzle has fallen

The last piece doesn’t fit

For the last part is broken

And you are truly missing.

Reviews

[Jwana Creer Yeshua]

I like this...It shows your personality. Things don't always work out the way you want them to. We wish that they did but then life would not to be challenge. Challenges can make us or break us. The choice is all up to you. Just know you are not alone in this battle field. Everyone is going through it we just don't see it. I went to Jersey Shore High School. So I probably seen you around. For being a young writer you prove to be older in your years of writing. I am aksing you to challenge yourself each and every day. Life it is a climb but in the end it will be worth it. This was a great poem. I will be looking forward to more in the near future. Great Job!

Humbly,
Jwana Creer Yeshua