Quills

Whisper to me sonnets about nostalgia and desire.

Rhyme each line with iambic fire.

Tease my skin with a feathered quill leaving traces of ink.

Pen words of passion, etching deeper as we sink.

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Well, Jenna,
I've penned plenty of those kind of Sonnets.
"Quills" is a catchy title, an apt one to draw poetesses and poets onto your page and into your moment.
I think your lines are composed in excellent syntax, appealing and captivating imagery, with a smooth flow and simple, spot-on rhymes … I felt the nuances of warmth and soft sensuality, too.
A succinct but unhurried, well-struck, and skillfully rendered piece.

I thoroughly enjoyed this, enough to return and read several times before reviewing it for you.
Thank you most gratefully for the pleasure, Jenna ⁓ Richard : )

BTW:
Your "Don't Be Ashamed of Your Passions" (and much more) was very well put.

[Dream Weaver]

Nicely done Jenna, the last line is killer...