Two Souls Touched

Why are relationships so damn complicated?

You touched my soul with yours,

Opened your heart,

Letting your secrets pour over me

Like cold rain surprise.

You touched my laughter and laughed

In our Spring of Discovery

Both of us excited and humgry.

The surprise warm, fulfilling.

I pushed you too much

The wall was too hard

So you drew away

My fault, my surprising pain.

Have I wished, have I prayed

That Spring will renew our laughter

That souls once touched will remember.

That our surprise will return again.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad ending to a poem of hope and love. Sometime we make mistakes and hope to have another chance. I like the hopeful ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Mark]

Thanks Coyote :)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Wonderful read and write.

[Mark]

Thank you RM :)

[lee von cleef]

"humgry" ? Great line "My fault, my surprising pain." Surprise holds it together.

[Mark]

thanks lee :)