Not Mentioned

Where the wild one flows,

and the river is wide,

I stand all over alone

waitin' on this salty tide.

She says it's my time,

Says she can't regret.

She knows it's my line

Be awhile to forget.

Stands in the river,

Her bare feet are wet.

So cold, she starts to quiver

where wind and skin have met.

She says it's my time,

Says she can't ever regret.

She knows it's all a line

takes too long to forget.

White on the mirror

Sweet tinkles in glass

She unleashed the fever

and then it kicked my a*s

She says it's my time,

Says she can't ever regret

She knows it's all my line

She just won't ever forget.

While I stand and watch

my thoughts flow away.

I ponder a red pain splotch

turns the night into the day.

My heart is dried up

no more redness there.

So much I tried hard to stop

she laid my soul out bare.

She says it's all time

all in life she regrets

it was lost in that white line

Begs me, please, please forget.

She says it's my time,

says she can't ever regret.

She knows it's all my line,

She knows I can not forget.

She knows it's my time

addiction, regret.

She had to have that next line,

just, just, just to forget.

Reviews

[Geraldine]

Simply wow. I adore how you made it flowed so smoothly. :)) Great job. This is really beautiful poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful journey into emotion and thoughts.
"White on the mirror
Sweet tinkles in glass
She unleashed the fever
and then it kicked my a*s"
Some conversations lead to no-where. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote