Night Long

tame erotic blues

Long, down to the floor

long, knockin' down my door

movin, swayin' rounded hips

long and dancin' legs to lips

Falling so long on top of me

baby, you are my cup of tea

long legs swingin'

tonight I'm wingin'

come in here girl

stop right there

long legs unfurl

oh you're gonna share

long night dancin'

in my arms

fallin, prancin'

dusk til dawn

Baby, let me get me

out of your way

 long lovin', she

lets my magic play.

Long hair, long legs

raven night has come

teasin', see who begs

cursin' when we see the dawn.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Photo gave life to the poem. A beautiful woman can make us do many things. I like the tale in the poem and the good description. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sid]

Haha, this is a great poem and almost sounds a song, it has that kind of rhythm. Quite the description of the lady and it sounds like they were having fun...Great write!!

[Mark]

Thanks, I was trying to write as a song... I'm hearing Nickelback. :)

[Sid]

I used to listen to Nickelback some years back, good stuff, enjoy!! :)

[Blue Ivory]

Haha this is a pretty awesome poem! It sounds like some cool dance song. It just made me really happy :D Nice work!

[captain]

there is a musical note singing in my head while reading this. I like it very much!!!

[de_maruf]

eyes are so nice
hah ha

[lee von cleef]

I like the last line so many times, it has been different.

[Mark]

Thanks lee... ya that last one is kind of open.

[Mockingbird]

sounds like two people giving into their desires and having a good time. i like the tone of this poem.

[Mark]

Thank you :)

[mandy]

very sultry description of the lady! nice write mark. let's my magic play! wow

[Mark]

Thanks hon ;)

[Nautili]

i think this could be a good song....I can hear a bluesy tune with the words.

[Mark]

I was listening to Alvin Lee when I wrote it... probably has something to do with the rhythm :) Thanks!

[Antonio Valentino]

hey Mark whats up you trying to give us guys a heart attack haha

good stuff here friend!

:)

[Mark]

heh, glad you're still kickin' my friend! :)

[Antonio Valentino]

oh yeah.. im doing.. cough cough.. great lol

you too 8]