Nonsense

I didn't think, I just wrote

jam and cakes and feeling the brakes

horsell down the meander run

it fell, and broken shards no fun

wrestled the minds, twist til done.

Heart heard what she spoke

bones fell and then broke

even done the middle pink

whatever sizzling minds will think.

If dower tower flower power

were ruled in skied dark fire

Then walrus eyes red read coals

desire rests in those folds

I would speak, but mists are clear.

I wouldn't dream of taking,

that snow peak,with indecent fear

she couldn't seam the making.

Author's Note

capcha : mimusops

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

a fun poem, full of clever internal rhymes,a shade of automatic writing, even a small nick at James Joyce in the second line with the astute neologism horsell...good idea !

[Mark]

Thank you sir. Glad some one caught the horsell reference. Had JJ on my mind when writing this.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

It has a flavour of such sadness Mark so even if just free association it feels as though it expresses sentiment.

[redflutterby]

Uhmmm... My mind just whirled round and round while reading this. Lol.. Not sure exactly what it conveys but it did make me pick up snippets of feelings. None of them could be considered nonsense. ;-)