Winter

A winter poem

Come with me love ,
She breathed in foggy crystal cold.
I will love you to the bone
til you feel no pain
feel nothing but the cold.breath
I give you.

Eyes rimmed, lips cracked, not feeling
my feet I move toward a light
hoping it is Home.

Reviews

[Valentine]

All cold lonely hearts search for a home. Nice write. Valentine

[Mark]

Thanks for reading! :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Mark! I have not seen anything from you for a while. Good to read you.
This is literally a chilling piece. It has such great definition and expression and the description in few words leaves such a cold and empty fear in one.