Lost in the Hallways

In the West we are all about the destination, leading to a lack of appreciation for the search or the journey.

Fates and faults

and endless doors

feelings sucked down

in boggy moors.

I looked east

and saw no sun

so to the west

but saw no one.

Looking north

no hope I found

I looked south

at no firm ground.

my time wellspent

in these lost halls

I came and went

in climbs and falls.

Reviews

[just is]

I really enjoyed this one, such an amazing flow to this.
Loved the rhyme scheme as well. I can feel the rise and fall in this.
Awesome writing!