Ashes

You were my rising sun

And the moon that reflected in these deadened eyes

My perfectly fucked over pleasure 

And my endless hell

I wish you loved me

But time will never tell of our tragedy'

A ticket to sin is found in men like you

Now that my innocence is gone

And the ability to feel

All that is left is the ashes of me and you

Reviews

[Chris McGrath]

Your writing makes me feel your pain, Becky. Be the Phoenix and rise from these ashes, alone for now and stronger than ever for having survived this monster you have defeated.

[Darkened_drear]

Thank You Chris:)I have risen though some scars are never forgotten and at times there will be wounds that last nearly forever..love is cruel like that..but I was born a phoenix..and I will die one..because its live or die..and I chose to live:)loved your review ...it was one of substance and true understanding

[Chris McGrath]

I agree! All pain leaves scar tissue that never completely heals, but these very scars distinguish us from the untried masses traveling blindly through life with no chance of leaving a mark or making a difference. YOU have the scars to make a difference!

[Darkened_drear]

I want to make a difference :)for I know one needs to be made...I am not blinded anymore..my pain taught me to see what is truly there...to see through the lies most of society never could:)Strength is all that's left in a world that has become defective and deaf to what is about to happen next...Your inspirational Chris because you to are one of a kind...you make a difference as well

[Chris McGrath]

Thank you for your kindness, Rebecca. I have also experienced many lies, told by people speaking with authority of office. I have done my own research. I have just published my first novel that traces these lies back two thousand years. It is called Remote Control and it is available from Amazon in paperback and Kindle versions. I would treasure any comments or feedback you might have! Here is a trailer:
https://vimeo.com/102168449

[Darkened_drear]

I am delighted Chris and I will check it out:)Seems like these days Society has become Sheeples in masses ...its as if their brains are dead ..

[Chris McGrath]

Thank you! I couldn't agree more! When I was a kid in Vietnam, my superiors instructed me to educate the local populace how much better off they would be in a democratic government rather than a communist one. When I told them that communism was the opposite of capitalism and that it was a form of economy and not government, they threatened me with a stay in Leavenworth!

[Darkened_drear]

You are welcome and threats are never good..what they fear is what they try to destroy even if it is there for there good