The Night to Die

I wrote this a long time ago

Don't you see

I have so much pain inside

The world doesn't need me

Maybe I should die

Then I feel a faint ray of hope

It tells me to keep trying

Sometimes I wanna say nope

Tonight I'm dieing.

Reviews

[Jake Donald Stephens]

I've had a lot of nights like that too. But we're both still here, so we must have kept trying after all.
Thanks for sharing your great work.

[Dead]

awe thanks

[Firebird]

Glad you are still here and writing and hope you are having some fun. Take care of yourself.

[Dead]

Thank you