ME

Days come and days go

No one notices

No one knows

The darkness conquers me 

It tears me apart

It's there but no one bothers to see

That I have to much pain on my heart

I don't let the light in

Because I can't bare to be hurt again

So I'll just stow away my pain

And hope it disappears with the rain.

Reviews

[Aphy!]

Very nice piece
Strong
Powerful
Effortless
Pure talent

Aphy

[Dead]

Thanks :)

[BLitZeD]

solid bass rhymes .

[Dead]

thanks lol

[BLitZeD]

i read over a couple of your poems just now. i like ur style of writing. if you ever wana do a colab id gladly follow up after you

[Dead]

lol i will if you want to

[BLitZeD]

of course send it to me when ur done

[Dead]

so you want me to make a poem send it to you so you can edit and add to it?

[BLitZeD]

im not gana edit yours im just gana read it and go off it under it, then send it back to you to post .... if you want to of course

[Dead]

oh ok that sounds fun! any specific subject?

[BLitZeD]

what ever you desire lol

[Dead]

sorry i took that wrong for a moment lol

[BLitZeD]

?? lol lost me there

[Dead]

the word Desire... I thought for a moment you meant like how a person who loves food has a strong desire for food not whatever i wanted

[BLitZeD]

ohh got you

[Dead]

yea lol ill work on it when i get out of school or later tonight

[Simon Welsh]

Sometimes the rain is kind. And endless. Nicely written.

[Dead]

Thank you!!!! Lol you just made my day.