Life

I was in one of those moods...

Endless tears

Million fears

Bad start

Broken heart

Worse end

Dead again.

Mess up

Chipped cup

Hidden feeling

Head reeling

Not kissed

Just dissed.

I failed

I'm veiled 

From sight

Flightless kite

Rat race 

No grace.

Hidden sin

Back again

Bad fight

Long night

Sharp knife

End life.

Author's Note

Sorry this makes no sense.

Reviews

[TheHomelessHeart]

i like this.. .like i really like it, but at the same time i don't, not as in i don't like your work, i just dont like the feel of it when im reading it, quite sad if im honest.

the way its just very very short sentences are good, but its also weird to read at the same time ahah, great poem nonetheless:)

[RJ]

lol thanks -Dead

[Jimmy Yetts]

A verbal going-down-the-drain.
Effectively portrays progressive descent.
Nicely done!

[RJ]

thanks -Dead

[wordman]

a great write,a little sad,but we all visit there

[Dead]

some more than others....

[wordman]

yes,of course

[aruntp Thalassery]

Many negative feelings...hope you rewrite with positive feelings...