Crush

Just trying something new.

Oh no,

What is this feeling,

I've never felt this way before you know.

His smile sends my head reeling,

I feel like there's a lot of butterflies in me,

Oh no I think he caught me looking,

Wait he's coming in my direction,

What do I do,

I wonder if he sees what he does to me,

I look him in the eye,

Oh he's so handsome,

I think I might die.

Reviews

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Hahaha :) this is so cute. I can relate to this really well. nice work. :)

[Lover Of Words]

This is great
Keep on bringing spectacular.
Awesome.

[Dead]

Thank you :)

[Lover Of Words]

You are welcome

[HipsterPrincess17]

Oh! I love this poem!
I can relate to this poem a lot ,and I'm sure others do too!
Wonderfully written!
Keep on writing
Keep on inspiring
Your friend
Lia

[Dead]

Lol thanks you just made my day a lot better

[Bohrium Guy]

Nice look at what one would be thinking when love hits. Good imagery and great write!

~Rob~

[wordman]

sounds like love to me ! great write

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

wow, so beautiful, love it!!!! keep up the amazing and beautiful work