Stolen Moments

Making time for one another

Slow hands
make time for me

in sweeping second touch,

as my face
traced
with gentle fingers
makes me
tick.

my heart
a beating clock

that craves forever this

our stolen time


alone.

Reviews

[Raspberry Rebel]

It's those stolen moments that often are the most powerful...What's craved...a moment when a second lasts forever...Were we are left longing for a repeat upon repeat...Of couple time :) Reminded me of a poem I wrote, not as subtle as this...but then again sublety has never been my strongest point lol I must dig it out and post it here.

[VelvetRosetta]

How I wish I had more time for those stolen moments. Lovely!

[dutch2lips]

loved the simplicity of this write, it enhanced the feeling, beautiful

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

I love this, it is simply beautiful and perfect. I love your poetry more and more with each one I read. xo

[pinkasylum]

Your true gift comes out in this piece, I like it, it is powerful, fulfills the passion of this moment that we all have "stolen" one brief episode in our lives. BRAVO!

[SilentVerses]

I like it, the timid voice is sweet and gentle, whispering a devotion of love and desire chastely described with an innocence lovely and elegant.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Wonderfully stated!! The gentle touch of womans hands on a man! More more!!

[Daytonight]

So very beautiful! I love the form as well as the romance this was penned with. Keep up the great work!