Jacob's Scooter

My Muse Feeling Playful

He likes to ride his scooter
all around the town,
first he rides it up the street
and then he rides it down.

He rides it in a circle
he zig~zags left and right,
then tries to ride it backward
oh what a funny sight.

He rides it in the garden
and rides it on the path,
he rides it with a hearty smile
and with a jolly laugh.

He rides it fast he rides it slow
and somewhere inbetween,
then rides it through the puddles
just to get his wheels clean.

Jacob rides his scooter
all throughout the day
and when at last at nights repast
he put it safe away.

Author's Note

Please be honest

Reviews

[pinkasylum]

Ya gotta write the whimsical too shadow .. huh?! sweet and appealing in the words refrain .... I love 'Ode to Scooter"!

[francinebc]

Oh my goodness. To write the way you do would surely be a magnificent gift.
This is amazing. It makes me want to go out, get a pet mouse and anme it Jacob. (although my nephew is Jacob, but he is more of a rat than a mouse)

[VelvetRosetta]

Makes me want to buy a scooter!

[laura hope]

this is wonderful, you're very talented love.

[Daytonight]

I love Jacob's new adventure! He always brightens my day. ^^ Keep up the awesome work!

[Becky C Strukamp]

I JUST LOVE THIS POEM. IT IS SO LIGHT AND FULL OF JOY AND SHOWS THE SIMPLE BEAUTY AND JOY IN THE WORLD. EXCELLENT POEM. IT FILLED MY HEART WITH JOY!!A GREAT WAY TO START ONES DAY. THANK YOU FOR WRITING IT AND SHARING IT.