My muse is angry

My muse is angry

A Poem by Inyourshadow
"

My muse is my illness, long story.

"

                     He's there
                 behind my eyes
                      watching

                  he's watching
                  watching me
                   mocking me
                 with my tongue
                      my voice
                     my words
                they're my words
                  leave them be
                my muse is angry
                  he's so angry
                  angry at me
         fighting fighting fighting me


                  and he's winning

© 2011 Inyourshadow


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You make vivid and clear in our reality, the relentless haunting of the dark voices in our minds.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh boy do I get this one... Mine has been having a blast with me this weekend. Very frustrating. But you have penned this perfectly my friend. xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


wonderful write I love the flow of the words. Thanks for your review btw :)


Posted 14 Years Ago


I believe often mental illness will be a muse. I know that's the case for me.

Posted 14 Years Ago


absolutely amazing..
sounds like your trying to escape yourself,
or your ashamed of what youve become.
number of things it culd be.
a-m-a-z-i-n-g.:D

Posted 14 Years Ago


Still, very understandable. :3

Posted 14 Years Ago


Kind of interesting, but not quite what I expected. Or thought.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Sometimes even anger can pull out something great. Anger can inspire and ignite the creative flow of our words

Posted 14 Years Ago


Keep on keeping on! Keep on penning.

Posted 14 Years Ago


keep up the good fight!
an angry muse is still YOUR muse
use the muse..:)

nice piece

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Inyourshadow
Inyourshadow

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I am trying to broaden my abilities as a writer, hoping to learn new styles and ways to express myself. I am married with 4 kids and a beautiful grandson, plus my two wonderful yorkshire terriers T.. more..