Bleeding Veins

Always good to open a vein or two

Smiling

                  he opened a vein

     and stood

to watch it bleed




he laughed

                   as it pooled reflecting light


screaming aloud

                   

                    "  I DID IT!     I DID IT! "






" I'M RICH
             GOLD AT LAST! "

Author's Note

Admit it you were thinking something else, I love misdirecting your thoughts,

Reviews

[Raspberry Rebel]

Rich indeed, how CRUDE...oil be damned lmao, the picture gave it away...brilliantly done :)

[VelvetRosetta]

Ok I was like hes so happy hes dying hes saying he rich at last..DUH ...Had to read it twice lol, ok ok I am either slow or your good, I will opt for the second option, I love the way you twist my mind!

[Dreaming_and_hoping]

I was a little disturbed, till the last line XD
This is awesome, great job misleading our thoughts! haha~

[ScaryTrees]

clever clever...lol
this little twist was a welcome bit of fun
thought it was just another emo trip for a sec :P
well done