Chasing the wind

Chasing the wind,

Trying to live

Up the radiant clouds,

In the sea of vibrance and blue,

Under the sky of lilies and daffodils

Painted with starry daisies.

Chase the winds

Flow with the blow,

Let it take you to the end of the sunrise,

Or, to the backside of the moon.

Rising with the winds, soar high above

From the lushy colourful windy meadows

Into the fascinating facade above,

Which holds the secrets of the cosmos.

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

Interesting poem....chasing the wind....
There are some "clunky" workds here like backside.....and it could perhaps be adjusted a little to help the flow.....but I liked the overall message and spirit

BB73

[Irene_asteris]

Thank you for the advice! I'll look into it and I'm glad that you liked my poem